So I’m writing another post Reichenbach song called ‘The Aftermath’ and I’d really like some opinions on the lyrics before I write anymore in case they totally suck.
With sudden pang of pain
I realised you were gone
When I poured two cups of tea
But only needed one.
So I set yours on the counter
I walked over to your chair
And I sat in it for hours
Weeping with despair.
I went into your bedroom,
And I stood there for a while
The room still had your smell
Like sweet mint and camomile.
I lay there on your bed
My head upon your place
And I thought about your words
And that look upon your face.
But I stopped myself from thinking,
But was it out of fear?
No, I think I stopped for something else;
Those words you’ll never hear.
But I just finished recording a Sherlock song and I would be so incredibly grateful if I could get feedback on it
It’s my first attempt at this so constructive criticism is welcomed
Song here: [x]
